Redline please?

[Faust]

Um yes, this is just something I made in class to day. I was hoping someone could redline it for me.



Note the two smaller images are Foxes

The chibi is Faust

[LockHeart]

no idea if this will help, I was just scribbling cause you caught me with my tablet out.

[Faust]

Yep this will help. Thank you ;D.

[LockHeart]

Oh, I forgot to add some shape to the eyes, but I figured you already knew the eyes are off. I kind of like those you did on the snarling dog.

[Faust]

Yupers, I noticed. Thanks for the complement *Licks you*

[River]

Because I'm on a different computer, I can't redline it real well but I will mention some things...

The eyes on the totally awesome headshot are too close together and a bit human in appearance. They should be tilted down slightly and given the typical puppy tear-ducts. Though they are flying back, the ears should be positioned sideways and flowing backward rather than up, the inner portion facing away from the viewer and probably out of sight.

A major thing to poke is the tongue. If you want a more realistic touch to it, it would have to be more flat toward the back of the mouth, appearing as a more straight line rather than the typical two humps. Also, the tip should be far more rounded, the edges folded up particularly between the teeth. If you look at a photo of a dog, you'll notice that their tongues are wider than the space between their canines. Folds and bending around that area should accommodate it...

As for the other two piccies, the poses are nice but, as far as foxes go, they're a little lanky. The legs should be shorter, the bodies longer to simulate a smaller size. The little chibi on the bottom is perfect though. X3

Hope all that makes sense... ^^

[Faust]

Yeah it does River ;D Thank you as well.