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Jellybean Queen
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Jan 14, 2007 8:31:28 GMT -5
Post by Sky on Jan 14, 2007 8:31:28 GMT -5
img113.imageshack.us/img113/2761/skytprbl083761tm9wp7.gif[/img]Name: Sky Alias/Nicknames: S, Kay Gender: Female Race: Human Age: 20 Height: 1 and a half meters Weight: 7-8 stone Pack/Group: - Rank: -
Mate: - Spawn: - Siblings: - Dame: Lynn (location unknown) Sire: Joe (location unknown) Personality Type: Quite quiet, keeps to herself.
Personality:
Sky is like any other human really, she enjoys archeology and so loves to explore the Galt ruins- she has even got a shop where she sells all her findings. Even though she is quiet she is still very friendly, if she does seem to find herself meeting someone she is not afaid to speak her mind. She is kind and gentle to all creatures and enjoys studing them. She knew little her parents and spends her spare time trying to look for them or find as much as she can about them. Sky never gets angry, she is a peace loving person and would not harm a fly
Appearance:
Sky isn't really a fashion fanatic and so has a very simple style. Plain clothes, usually flat colours fill her closet as well as not so stylish plain coloured trainers. Even though Sky has an unnatural hair colour Hair is not so important, always in a pony tail. When it is cold out side she usually wears long sleaved t-shirt and trousers in those plain flat colours with usually a coat. In times like the summer a T-shirt and shorts would usually do. When she is stuck in a book she does wear glasses, plain black frames, nothing too fancy.
History:
It was February the 9th, an unforgetable day was yet to come for Sky, with a light breeze and a cool summer sunshine it seemed like a perfect day for a BBQ. Her parents, Lyn and Joe, set up all the equipment and started to light it. After everyone had eaten, Sky ,being only three years old, didn't realise the BBQ was still a light and so tugged at one of the poles holding it up. The BBQ started to fall to the ground and set the lawn ablaze. The fire semmed to grow and the panicing parents first instinct was to save the child then try and put out the flames. Lynn and Joe were never seem again
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Sky
All ur base are belong to us!
Jellybean Queen
If violance is not the answer then what is the question
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Sky
Jan 14, 2007 16:09:05 GMT -5
Post by Sky on Jan 14, 2007 16:09:05 GMT -5
please tell me what you think
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Jan 15, 2007 10:12:08 GMT -5
Post by River on Jan 15, 2007 10:12:08 GMT -5
It's waaaaaaaaaaay too short Sky. You should have at least a small paragraph under each topic... except maybe appearance since you have a picture. Still, I would like you to describe her since that's not a very good picture.
How long is her hair? How is is styled? Does she like to style it differently sometimes? What about her clothes? Humans wear more than one outfit in their life time, so what else is she seen wearing? What about when it's cold outside, what does she wear then? When it's hot? Does she wear glasses maybe? Have any scars? What color are her eyes? How are they shaped? Are they big on her face, making her look more innocent? Or are her eyes long and narrow like someone suspicious? Does she have any jewelry?
For her personality, what does a normal person act like? Is she friendly? How friendly? Toward friends or toward everyone? Is she suspicious of strangers at all? Suspicious of men maybe? Suspicious of anyone? Does she ever get sad? When? When she remembers her parents? When she is betrayed by someone she cares for? When does she get angry, if at all? Is she funny? Quiet? Loud and boisterous? Outgoing?
For history, I'm not too picky. Just elaborate a little more. When was the fire? How old was she? Was she injured at all? What happened before hand? Was she good friends with her parents? Or did she hate them? Where did she go after the fire? Was she old enough to be out on her own? Or was she adopted and raised by another family? How did she end up here at Hellion Reign? Were her parents scientists? Did she move her for the peace and quiet? Or was she born here? What does she think of the experiments being performed?
Just basically elaborate. You don't have to answer all of my questions but that's what I mean by elaborate. Tell us more. Give us some details so it doesn't seem like you threw this character together in like two seconds. Make it look like you put some thought into it... I'm not saying you didn't put any thought into it, but from where I'm sitting, it doesn't really look like you did.
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Sky
All ur base are belong to us!
Jellybean Queen
If violance is not the answer then what is the question
Posts: 315
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Sky
Jan 15, 2007 10:43:24 GMT -5
Post by Sky on Jan 15, 2007 10:43:24 GMT -5
i know, i was rushing it
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Jan 15, 2007 10:45:30 GMT -5
Post by River on Jan 15, 2007 10:45:30 GMT -5
Why? You should never rush your character creation. It ends up just being a waste of time. If you don't have time, type up some of it and put WIP at the top and come back to it. ;3
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Sky
All ur base are belong to us!
Jellybean Queen
If violance is not the answer then what is the question
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Sky
Jan 15, 2007 11:03:43 GMT -5
Post by Sky on Jan 15, 2007 11:03:43 GMT -5
sorry, but i have school and homework, i can't spend all day doing something that doesn't really mean something
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Jan 15, 2007 11:09:43 GMT -5
Post by River on Jan 15, 2007 11:09:43 GMT -5
I'm not asking you to spend all day. It shouldn't take you more than five minutes to type up a paragraph... and, like I said, if you run out of time or you get bored, stop and put WIP at the top and come back to it later. It's your character, the person whose life you will be living on this site for as long as you are a part of it. It should be important. Sure, not necessary in your every day life but you should be willing to put at least an ounce of effort into it...
And we the staff will be here to help you every step of the way. I don't want you to stress yourself out about the character but I do want you to do your best with it, that's all I ask. I spend a lot of time making sure everything on this site runs smoothly and that everyone is treated equally and all that. All I ask in return in three paragraphs and ten or twenty minutes of your free time. Is that really so much?
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Sky
All ur base are belong to us!
Jellybean Queen
If violance is not the answer then what is the question
Posts: 315
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Sky
Jan 15, 2007 11:13:04 GMT -5
Post by Sky on Jan 15, 2007 11:13:04 GMT -5
but i'm really terrible at writing, i have no imagination and does a silly character profile really matter?
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Jan 15, 2007 11:17:20 GMT -5
Post by Sargy [Jigg] on Jan 15, 2007 11:17:20 GMT -5
Yes, if you want to be able to roleplay, the profile is the most important thing. And you've already started a roleplay, so you should obviously finish the profile, make sense?
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Jan 15, 2007 11:17:53 GMT -5
Post by River on Jan 15, 2007 11:17:53 GMT -5
I'm not asking you to write a good paragraph, and even if I did, you are a fantastic writer. i read your rp post and it's a fine looking paragraph so I know you can do it. Perhaps the bio itself doesn't matter too much but if you are capable of writing a paragraph, which I know you are, why not just write it? Does it hurt you in some way? Does it really take you so long to write one? I want to know...
No, the bio itself doesn't matter much at this point, but I find it rather hurtful that you'd rather blow this off like it's nothing than do what I ask of you. Perhaps the bio isn't anything to you, but it is for me... and maybe I shouldn't ask you to do this for me but I ask for clarification on any and all confusing/short biographies... and I play no favorites. It's only fair that everyone have at least a small paragraph. I've asked this of plenty of members, and you are no different...
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Sky
All ur base are belong to us!
Jellybean Queen
If violance is not the answer then what is the question
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Sky
Jan 15, 2007 11:22:31 GMT -5
Post by Sky on Jan 15, 2007 11:22:31 GMT -5
okay, i'm sorry
i just couldn't think of anything at the time
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Jan 15, 2007 11:26:17 GMT -5
Post by River on Jan 15, 2007 11:26:17 GMT -5
I understand that. That's why i gave you the list of questions, to give you ideas. ^^ You don't have to answer every single one but it might help....
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Sky
All ur base are belong to us!
Jellybean Queen
If violance is not the answer then what is the question
Posts: 315
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Sky
Jan 15, 2007 12:12:11 GMT -5
Post by Sky on Jan 15, 2007 12:12:11 GMT -5
it's finished
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Jan 15, 2007 12:23:42 GMT -5
Post by River on Jan 15, 2007 12:23:42 GMT -5
Much better. ^^ Thank you.
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Sky
All ur base are belong to us!
Jellybean Queen
If violance is not the answer then what is the question
Posts: 315
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Sky
Jan 15, 2007 12:27:01 GMT -5
Post by Sky on Jan 15, 2007 12:27:01 GMT -5
no, thank you
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Jan 15, 2007 14:14:34 GMT -5
Post by Fervenplaga on Jan 15, 2007 14:14:34 GMT -5
Very nice character. Very unique.
Splee for the first non-scientist hoomin!
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Sky
All ur base are belong to us!
Jellybean Queen
If violance is not the answer then what is the question
Posts: 315
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Sky
Jan 15, 2007 14:18:37 GMT -5
Post by Sky on Jan 15, 2007 14:18:37 GMT -5
hoomin, shcoomin
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