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Generated;; Anck-Su-Namun [a-knock-sue-naw-moon]
called;; Moon
created;; banshee
blood;; Grey wolf
changed;; hellhound
Turned;; 3 winters
Built;; 2.5 c
Weight;; 70 lbs
kingdom;; P4 Jungle// Loner
Rank;; unknown


Lover;; none
Fawn;; none
sister;;Nineveh
Matriarch;; deceased
Patriarch;; caged

Voice Type;; daringly sweet
Personality Type;; e v i l

Personality;;
With every living creature there is good, and there is evil. Yet I happen to be a creature where the darkness has corroded my bleeding vessel to the point where few can see the light with in. My heart is frozen for I have lived like an assassin since the day I was born, yet that day is one I will never forget. Often I find myself thinking of all that has happened to me, they chained my so tight I could barely stand, yet they forgot one thing. Me and my sister were different, they weren’t prepared for the hell I was willing to put them through. I broke free, I spread my wings and the mayhem began. Ruthless, I now am ruthless as I travel the world with my one sister, we both bare the deformities of human testing, our wings give it away perfectly. Yet now I find myself destroying in pure bliss of seeing all who has tried to hurt me suffer, I trust no one. Perhaps this is why I will never find love, a thing I crave for yet can never find, I crave it so…to feel loved and not looked down upon because I am different. Forget it, I will kill all who cross me, I am born for one purpose, they made me a monster whose sole conquest is to conquer and destroy. Yet I feel pleasure when seeing the blood drip from another lifeless body, no matter what it is, yet I am not one to turn on ones I hold dear, I have stayed with my pathetic sister for an eternity which is my complete life afraid to leave her for the thought that she should perish. We were born in hell, raised in it and my hatred for creatures has passed that of just human and has seeped into my ever judging mind to the point where I hate all. I loathe all, yet I know none. Can you understand me? I doubt it, as brave as you may be few have ever dared to make contact with the creature who dwells within this carcass of flesh. Few have ever talked to me and I enjoy it that wasy, I would rather not become friends with those I know will only destroy me in the end. I was born to destroy, yet if the cost is my life I will destroy those who made me this monster.Why not I have no lover, no fawn….I feel no pain, no love…I am hollow. Forever broken.

Appearance;;

- elongated claws due to eagle dna planted into her mother before birth
-strong wings
-pitchblack eyes
-violet&&sapphire wings from chemicals
-fur like feathers


upperhand
- glide
- mentally attacking
- verbal tactics
-c u tthroat ♥
- eyes that see like a hawk

downfall
-love
-ankles due from the tight chains
-light wieght bones
-ego

History;;
-mother genetically tortured while pregnant
-Litter mostly killed by the chemical
-Two survors, both female.
-Cage not superior enough to hold them
-Broke free
-Raised hell ever since on their wings

[River]

Okay, a few things here. First off, the picture provided does not provide enough information about her being a hellhound for me to accept this character. You're going to have to describe to me each and every one of her traits, take care not to leave anything out. You need to tell me what they are, how they work, and what effect they have on your character.

Most importantly, you'll need to add a strengths and weaknesses section. We have a form for hellhounds and, though I like that you haven't followed it exactly, you need to at least include all of the info, particularly her strengths and weaknesses.

Also, I'd like it if you could convert at least her personality to a paragraph format. You obviously know enough about her as a character to put these traits into sentences, yes? So, why not? ^^; It's more a personal preferrence than anything else but paragraphs just look better, more professional like. The History is fine, if rather vague.

Finally, her weight is terrible. X3 If you do a little research you will find that a dog that is 36 in tall (a great dane) normally weighs 150 lbs. Your hound here is more than half a foot taller and not even half that weight. 70 lbs. is extremely emmaciated. If that's what you want, then go for it but she'd have almost no muscle mass and wouldn't be able to fight or hunt very well due to her light weight.

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understandable;; fixed most of it working on the paragraph

[River]

Okay. Take your time on that note. ^^

But we do have a problem. I'm afraid your hound cannot be able to fly. That's just too far outside the possibilities of science and medicine at this point. She can have wings but they should be useless, maybe assisting in jumping but only a little bit (no leaping across the grand canyon or anything). If anything, they'd be heavy and they'd offset her balance strongly. But she's otherwise good.

I'd rather she be four feet tall or shorter but you don't have to change it if you don't want to. It's unnecessary but I just don't see any reason for her to be that tall. Plus, her wings would be more effective if she were smaller (naturally). She still wouldn't be able to fly though...

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finished

[v e n.geance♥]

can she gllide

like the gargoyles cant fly but if the jump off a cliff then they can soar downwards, or be caughtin the winds???

can I still do that...

i know im a dorjk I LOVE THE GARGOYLES

[River]

I suppose she could glide but you'd most certainly have to make her smaller for that. My physics textbook said she'd need an unfathomably wide wingspan into order to glide at her current height and weight. So, you'd have to make her much smaller for gliding to be plausible, closer to the 2 ft range... I think. O.o The formula for wing span involves Meters and I'm not good with conversions. X3

But yes, if you make her smaller, I would see no harm in gliding. Minor gliding, mind you. There should be no leaping from cliffs or diving off buildings or anything too extreme. She could glide across a stream maybe or a small gully but not much more than that.

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lol

no superman acts

*must retain batman status..must retain*

whew I'lll try

;D

[River]

X3 Well, I would like it if she were even smaller than that, more like 2 ft or so, with maybe a few inches extra but generally no bigger than a large border collie. Like I said, it's almost impossible to lift such a large creature off the ground, even for a minor glide.

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Done ;D