Cerberus
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Post by Cerberus on Feb 1, 2007 23:57:09 GMT -5
THIS IS NOT A FREE USE TEMPLATE. I REPEAT THIS IS NOT A FREE USE TEMPLATE.SEEKING APPROVAL Basic dataBirthname: Unknown Lab name: #26 Current alias: Canti Gender: Female Race: Hell hound Age: Two years old Height: 3.0ft Weight: 145lbs Pack informationCurrent pack: None Current rank: None Family relationsMother: Blitzkrieg Father: Howitzer Siblings: Unkown Love lifeBoyfriend: None Lover: None Mate: None Voice Type(s)Here's an example: You're watching the history channel tell the biography of Adolf Hitler. They show one of the many speeches he shouts to his men. Even though you have no idea what he's saying, you find your spirits rise, and without thinking you're cheering and yelling with the people on the TV. Your friend walks in and asks what you cheering for. You reply, "I dunno, but if he said it, then it's gotta be good!" That is her voice. It's suave, charming, and oozes with false promises. She's an excellent speaker to get the forces rallied, or send quivering prisoners to their deaths with a smile on their face. This, however, is only when she is lucid. The mind has decayed within the safe cocoon known as her skull. The experiments poisoned her thoughts, deleted the true, and replaced them with false memories. Her throat aches and causing the voice to become a hideous scratchy wail. A thousand little spiders and clicking claws are better descriptions, but that's hard to imagine. It's a hissing slur and a sultry purr. It's like vinegor and oil; tangy but smooth going down the throat. Personality Type(s)Dark and twisty, not bright and shiny. Personalities in depthShe's the leering shadow beneath your feet, waiting for your fall, and enjoying the defeat. She is the elusive enigma of violence and lust. The words she speaks curl and writhe as if they're dying upon her lips, but this only lures the prey. Then she has you in her claws, and all is lost. She's a rapist, a murderer, a bitch, and a lover. Warped thoughts prevent her from claiming a mate and holding them close. Sickening desires cause potential males from pinning her against a wall and taking her full force. To be short, she's a mad beast. AppearanceFor now all I have is lineart since I have not decided on the colors I wish to use for it.. so please refer to it when looking for the appearance. HistoryWill be written eventually... Strengths-Agility -Strong tentacle limbs -Swift fingers -Strong grip Weaknesses-Since her paws have become hands, she can no longer run, and this hinders her from quick escapes. -She also has weak wrists and cannot stand still for long periods of time. This makes her shark-like since she's always on the constant move. [Help?]
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Malice
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So fine, I never see you leaving by the back door.
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Post by Malice on Feb 2, 2007 0:15:25 GMT -5
Sorry, but I know River will have more to say. I just couldn't keep my maw shut.
First off cool char...
Second, I think she's too light with all the tentacles. Doubt she could run at all with those hand-paws which is probably why she is swinging, it'd take some strenght and control to do that. (Reminds me of an Aye-Aye.)
...alright I'll shut up now and let you finish everything <<'
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Post by Domnopalus on Feb 2, 2007 18:15:01 GMT -5
LOLZ TENTACLES
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Cerberus
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Post by Cerberus on Feb 2, 2007 18:27:18 GMT -5
e_e;
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Eleih
Ain't that just adorable?
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Post by Eleih on Feb 2, 2007 19:44:12 GMT -5
I like the design. she looks cool.
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Post by River on Feb 2, 2007 21:58:22 GMT -5
Yes, an awesome character indeed. :3
But you'll have to finish the bio before I can accept her. I don't know her strengths, her weeknesses and all that fun stuff... all the stuff I need to know to accept a character. ^^; Her appearance is very cool but you'd have to give her quite a few significant weaknesses to keep the strange hand paws... o.O It all depends on your justification of her traits.
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Cerberus
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Post by Cerberus on Feb 2, 2007 22:42:14 GMT -5
Added personality, strength, weaknesses, and editted voice thingy..
I need help though. XD
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Malice
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So fine, I never see you leaving by the back door.
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Post by Malice on Feb 3, 2007 1:14:48 GMT -5
Well I don't think he's have complete control of her limbs. Maybe they freak out on hir. Plus she'd be heavy and since you say she has week wrists, I could see her resting alot or being in pain.
Grip probably wouldn't be strong because the canine mind isn't use to it. She's only two also, so control I believe would be acquired over time at least for the hands.
*shrug* River would have ideas
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Post by oo on Feb 3, 2007 3:03:56 GMT -5
*eyes own post* sorry for the switch in pronouns through out that thing... Went from male, to herm, and then female. <<; It's really hard for me to switch back from herm to female...can you tell what I've been RPing as? lol
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Post by River on Feb 5, 2007 7:01:26 GMT -5
Ideas, you say? Hmm...
Well, imagine your wrist as being a foot and try to use it like one. I doubt you'll be able to jump at all, the movement would probably bend your hand back so far the joint would literally snap. The bottoms of the hands would then become quite callous from being walked on all the time meaning they wouldn't be nearly as sensitive as hands should be. Any motions that require most or all of the body weight to be supported by the back legs is also highly improbable... like jumping (already said that >.>), any attacks involving both front paws (unless she sits down first and then rears up, which leaves her underside exposed), and running (which you've already covered)...
Hmmm... Her balance is probably terrible. If those really are strong tentacles then they'd be super heavy. All of that weight is concentrated on her back end... more importantly, all of that weight is concentrated over her hind wrists. Supporting all of this weight almost constantly on her hands, I doubt she'd have a strong grip as well...
But... that's all I gots so far... o.O
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