Post by Whisperdale on Feb 25, 2007 6:56:56 GMT -5
(Please note her legs and tail should be a little longer, I was too lazy to detailify her paws. :3)
G.e.n.e.r.a.l
Name:
Hajakari. Pronounced, Hah-jah-kar-ee.
Alias/Nicknames:
Haja.
Gender:
Female
Race:
Hellhound. She's always been one, Or at least she can't remember what she was before.
Age:
Seven.
Height:
4'0". Quite a big beast, height only enhanced by her muscular bulk.
Weight:
It's hard to tell, because she's emaciated. She's probably very heavy though, muscle does weigh more than fat.
Pack/Group:
She's a loner, with good reason.
Rank:
B.l.o.o.d.l.i.n.e.s
Mate:
Long dead.
Spawn:
A young male called Akuju, and a female called Yahrune. They're both twins. (And might be brought in later for plottishness. xD)
Siblings:
None living.
Dame:
Etapa, a dire wolfess.
Sire:
Thanos, a raving lunatic of a hellhound.
M.i.n.d
Persona:
Hajakari isn't a particularly nice creature. When she was "made", she was tampered with so that she'd not only look vicious, but really put her whole soul into the act of killing. She's quite bloodthirsty, not hesitating to lash out when threatened just to taste the other's life essence. She's pretty arrogant too, and that combined with her bold nature makes her difficult to get along with. She often acts rashly and without thought, and it's really only her physical assets that keep her out of serious trouble. After years of being trained in battle, she's got a fighter's mentality; kill first, don't give them the chance to get you. Lash out first, ask questions later. Never turn your back to another. Aim for the weak spots and get to them as quickly as possible.
These all make Haja a dangerous creature to be on the wrong side of. Though she won't actually go actively hunting for fights and prowl around looking for victims, she has no remorse or pity for anyone who might meet their end beneath her talons or locked in her cavernous maw. Caution is a good thing around her; it may save your life.
Temper:
Haja has a few serious mental problems. As a result she has a "short fuse", and tends to explode spectacularly at minor things. So as you can imagine, something major makes her go absolutely ballistic. She'll turn from merely savage to a berserk monster, snapping left and right, flying through the air like an arrow, most likely for the throats of the unfortunate hounds who ticked her off. She's certainly a little mad, but then again she's seen plenty of things that would make madness come as no surprise.
Attitude:
She's quite a bitchy thing. As said she's arrogant and bold, but also dominant and quite sarcastic at times. She can be pretty nasty at times, as it's not just her claws she's honed to a razor edge. She's very cutting with her remarks also. Haja has a bad attitude, and it gets her into major problems sometimes. After all, how many other hellbeasts want an over-aggresive, dominant, up-your-own-ass type of beast in their midst?
V.i.e.w
Appearance:
There are a few things about Hajakari that make her instantly stand out from the crowd. Because the scientists who made her wanted the most savage-looking creature they could find, she's got a few things that are more of a problem than a help in battle. They wanted her to be able to frighten the opposition away, something to match her bad attitude.
And they did pretty well designing her.
First, there's her mane. It stands stiffly along her spine, spiky and bright crimson in coloring. It continues from just before her ears all the way to the base of her tail, and is about a foot long in some places. It's one of the things that cause more problems than good, as if it gets wet it usually collapses into her face. Even when dry it can get in her way, drifting before her eyes and often rendering her blind.
And another thing. Her Eyes... Or her Eye. She's only got one, but that's no fault of the people who made her. She was born with two, fully operational eyes, but her right eye was ripped out in a fight a long time ago. An empty socket torn by scars marks the place where the glittering orb once was, only enhancing her hellish apperance. But of course, that too causes major problems, because she can only see what's going on on her left side. Her remaining orb is of a fiery yellow, sun-hued and clear as an owl's.
Her fur is very short over most of her body, much like a horses'. The exceptions are her tail and her throat, where the fur is a good bit thicker. This results in a scruffy look, and a particular weakness against the cold. But it does help by the fact it allows her to run faster and for longer by stopping her from overheating so fast, and is an asset in hot places. Her peltage is of deepest black, with blood red markings in broad stripes along her hide and swirls on her haunches. Her muzzle is dyed the same crimson shades, her sockets framed by maroon.
Her tail is long and sinewy, ending in a plume of crimson fur, a little like a tiger's. It was designed with such length to give her extra balance when leaping around, and she puts it to good use while running and climbing. Being thick as it is, it provides some offensive advantage in battle, though she doesn't really use it that often. It causes problems too; mainly by leaving bright crimson hairs lying around wherever she goes, making her easy to track. The fur there is easy to pull out, as it's not naturally part of her.
As said, she's a real powerhouse of a beast. Muscles stand like nountains from her hide, skin seeming about to burst from the pressure behind it. Her neck is rock-hard with muscle and so are her limbs, legs long and bound tightly with the powerful bulk. They even manage to lightly mute the outline of her ribs, which would stand out instantly were she not so... Physicly capable.
Unfortunatly, this also means that an enemy is gonna do damage wherever they hit. And she's a lot heavier than your average beast, and is 99% guarenteed to sink in water. She can't swim, at all. Her body is just too dense.
Her legs are long and quite slender, compared to the rest of her. They still have a lot of muscle on them, but not in the extremity like her shoulders or haunches. They end in red-dipped paws, Strangely shaped, not much in the way of a wolf's. The toes are elongenated and thicker, the rough pads flatter. Her razor talons point straight out, curving down until they touch the earth. They are quite big, even with her proportions. Webbing joins each digit, though there's not much it can actually be used for... She has no bouyancy at all.
Her muzzle and crania are slightly elongenated, her skull a touch thinner than most's. Long sabers protrude from her fang-lined muzzle, a chip on her left one where she got careless in hunting. She really doesn't look anything like a dog, or even a wolf.
She's just a HellHound.
Build:
Hajakari, as already stated, has an extremely muscular build. She's big-boned and with powerful limbs.
But if you took all the bulk off of her, you'd probably find that her frame is more built for speed than the power it channels now. She'd be slender and built much like a greyhound, with a longish neck and tail. She now is more like a horse in build, with a wide back and much the same in bodily proportions. Even her ears bear some resemblance, though you can't see these... They've been torn off.
Coloring
Her main colors are blood red and black, with yellow eyes. Her claws are an ivory color, as are her sabers.
O.t.h.e.r
History:
You want to know her past? Ask her.
Strengths:
- Very, Very muscular.
- Athletic
- Sharp claws and sabers
- Heat-resistant
- Long legs allow for fast movement.
- Hard to flip, her weight means most can't budge her.
- Tail has some decent offensive properties.
Weaknesses:
- Right eye torn out, blind.
- Can't swim to save herself.
- Loner habits,
- Poor social skills,
- Rash, acts too quickly.
- Muscular bulk means lots of weak spots.
- Thin hide makes for poor insualation, cold bites right through her.
- Mohawk blinds her sometimes.
- Tail leaves red hair wherever she goes.
- She needs to be specially careful with her sabers.
- She's heavy, crumbling rocks and weak ground are a menace. *coughFLYINGHELLHOUNDS!XDcough*
- A combination of long legs and a lot of weight make her quite unstable on her feet, and it's not particularly difficult for her to lose her balance, unless running.
- Her height is an asset against larger enemies, but smaller hounds can sneak under her and attack her from below.
- Bulging shoulders restrict her breathing a bit, and she has to be careful not to overexert herself.
- Swinging her tail often causes her to spin off-balance.
- Her paws are a nuisance sometimes; They're not formed normally, so her "wrists" are more liable to damage or sprains.
- Talons can catch when running at high speeds too.
- When exhausted, she literally can't move. She's too heavy to so much as walk when she don't have the strength.
- She can be quite clumsy in close-quarter combat, and if she can't take someone out quickly she is likely to tire quickly from the efforts.
T.h.e.m.e.S.o.n.g
Static-X : Black and White
Evanescence : Eternal
Evanescence : Lies
The Rasmus : Lucifer's Angel (I think)
Nightwish : I Wish I Had An Angel
Nightwish : Nemo
Linkin Park : In The End
Anastacia : Everything Burns
Within Temptation : Grace
Within Temptation : A Dangerous Mind
