0070176 - Pseudo (please validate my character!)

[Pseudo-0070176]

Name: 0070176
Alias/Nicknames: Pseudo
Gender: Bitch
Race: Canine, German Shepherd/Border Collie
Age: 1.5 Years
Height: 3'6"
Weight: 52lbs
Pack/Group: Humans at Galt Labratory
Rank: None.

Mate: None.
Spawn: None.
Siblings: None.
Dame: Dead.
Sire: Test-tubes count?

Voice Type: Young
Personality Type: Quiet, easily angered. Sullen and kept to herself but outwardly kind by her actions.

Personality:
Bitchy, angered easily. Never one to talk much. She is constantly bitching through vocals, to the point where a few have wanted her vocal chords severed.

Appearance:



History:
Borne to a mother with no will to live, she watched her own mother die next to her. After an experiment gone wrong, a chemical mishap occured with her body. She became blind.

[Sadae]

You'll need more info than that most likely although I'm not the official profile viewer. It might help if you could go more indepth with your character's personality and history. Even anything about her family/relatives.

[Malice]

Character Sheet

There's the link to what is needed in a profile Pseudo

[River]

Yeah, they're right. You'll be needing a bunch more details.

What do you mean by bitchy? Elaborate on what it means to be a bitch. What does she do to be called a bitch? Does she do mean things? Bite people? Pee on people? Ignore people? Insult people? Or does she just talk a lot? Who calls her a bitch? Humans? Hounds? Other dogs? Why do they call her a bitch? What does she think about being called a bitch? Does she like it? hate it? Does it make her sad or depressed? If not, what does? Or is she always just angry at the world?

Also, since she is just a normal dog, she wouldn't have been experimented on as that would classify her as a hellhound. So, you can either call her a hellhound or change her history... either way, you'll need to add more. How did her mother die? Did she commit suicide? Did someone kill her? How? And why? Where did this happen? In the labs or out on the street? Where did Pseudo go afterward? Out into the wild? Or did she just wander the village? Does she have an owner? Where did she get her collar? From whom? Why'd they give it to her?

Sorry this took so long, btw. I have been swamped with school work. @.@