Post by Domnopalus on Jul 13, 2006 10:09:40 GMT -5
Alright, late at night last night I sort of came up with the basic sequence of events into which you can insert your own scenes depending on which part of the plot they fit. If you guys have anything to add or subtract from this, PLEASE tell us! If this is acceptable, all your scenes will fit into each of these categories when they are being arranged by the writers/storyboarders and will be put in hopefully the most effective order, attention being paid of course to those of you who have ideas in their minds where you want your scene to turn up. We'll see!
River - I have taken your highly developed idea into account, but if you can find a way to make it work better with my ideas PLEASE DO! <3 (Or possibly we can ditch my ideas XD this is just a draft VERY subject to changes.)
Interestingly, I've found that our pre-conceived notions of this basic idea are QUITE similar!
Take a look at this, meanwhile:
The FLASHes will include split-second flashes of stills or very short animations of our character’s faces with extreme expressions, etc.
OKAY FOLKS. What do you think? This is just my idea which is a result of a creativity outlet, and therefore is extremely subject to change, additions/subtractions or an altogether complete REMODEL of the storyline. PLEASE FEEDBACK! <333
River - I have taken your highly developed idea into account, but if you can find a way to make it work better with my ideas PLEASE DO! <3 (Or possibly we can ditch my ideas XD this is just a draft VERY subject to changes.)
Interestingly, I've found that our pre-conceived notions of this basic idea are QUITE similar!
Take a look at this, meanwhile:
- Start maybe slow. Nature scenes, unspoiled animals, etc. [insert your scenes here] (*then River's idea springs into action) ((OR My idea: Scenes of wild animals, peaceful, happy dogs, etc., then focus on a resting/sleeping wolf pack. Suddenly there’s a disturbance – wolf closest to camera lifts its head quickly, ears erect and looking around. Others follow.))
- All of a sudden people come to capture! Brief scenes of different capturings – [insert your scenes here] Locking cages, nets, shackles being applied, etc. etc. of our animals before they were mutilated, then sudden BLACKNESS…pause…
- One light appears slowly near the center of the blank screen and turns into an examining table light as if you are looking up from the table into it. The ceiling and possibly equipment fades into view, then dark figures of the scientists crowd in…BLACK.
- ACTION FLASHES IN! [insert your scenes here] Torturing, pain, awful things, suffering, loss (maybe River trying to look up to the night sky for example); Interrupt action briefly for short dialogue between characters maybe in their cages or something (like, “We have to get out of here.” or something, you know.) Then resume action!
- Pause for angry Jiggsaw – “We will escape.” or something – then violent escape/destruction of labs, etc. [insert scenes here of our characters getting loose and destroying the labs, mostly with Jiggsaw (though we can show here flashbacks or flashforwards of our characters getting out if they didn’t escape exactly when Jigg escaped)] Breaking free (maybe someone breaking their chains and leaping in slow motion or something)…
- After escape, possibly blue sky. Fades into: Things slow down, more dialogue, introduction flashes of our characters doing things (doesn’t have to be in daylight or anything) [insert your scenes here]
- We see Jiggsaw (maybe zoom in on angry eye or something) and this marks the beginning of the rallying together scenes to get revenge, Jigg’s army, etc. [insert your scenes here] CONTINUE dramatic scenes with Jigg building up his army of our characters [insert your scenes here] building up---
- Until music intensifies more and more and we get split-second FLASH FLASH FLASH FLASH FLASH FLASH then BLACK and we hear Jigg’s menacing voice saying something revengeful like “We are here.” Laughing would be cool here too. And then BOOM our logo – HELLION REIGN with the light changing like on the main page. Then brief credits etc. like the end of movie trailers.
The FLASHes will include split-second flashes of stills or very short animations of our character’s faces with extreme expressions, etc.
OKAY FOLKS. What do you think? This is just my idea which is a result of a creativity outlet, and therefore is extremely subject to change, additions/subtractions or an altogether complete REMODEL of the storyline. PLEASE FEEDBACK! <333